The tribe prepares to abandon their home in the aftermath of Kareva's killing of the envoy. But first, they must send Varyta-Kogon to face the judgment of the gods.
I don't want to blow smoke up your arse, but I am going to anyway:
This is great. Like really, really good. The second chapter is awesome, just totally sets up the story and the whole underdog storyline is COOKING. World building is superb and I see this hard, dry world populated by hard, resourceful warriors. Great work.
I know, I know, and I’m just going to have to live with your disapproval on that one point. So, so glad you’re enjoying it. Thanks for the smoke, brother.
I don't want to blow smoke up your arse, but I am going to anyway:
This is great. Like really, really good. The second chapter is awesome, just totally sets up the story and the whole underdog storyline is COOKING. World building is superb and I see this hard, dry world populated by hard, resourceful warriors. Great work.
But, you know how I feel about shorter chapters!
I know, I know, and I’m just going to have to live with your disapproval on that one point. So, so glad you’re enjoying it. Thanks for the smoke, brother.