I took several hours off, and I've already teared up again here, 100% because of that last grin they shared on the battlefield, those "little moments" are so powerful: "Where his friend Uskol"
💜: "One of them must’ve climbed up freehand."
I love this scene between Turan and Kareva.
Love my dude: "at least that smug little shit wouldn’t be here to enjoy it."
This bonding moment between Alakuz and Miruz is a balm to my raw, bleeding soul.
:) "Many, many times."
You already knew I would, but I love love love the final conversation in the tent. Right to the core of it. Perfect conclusion, but now I'm dying to know what's next.
Absolutely not! I will note for public record (so it doesn't get twisted in the press), I hold deepest respect and admiration for Kareva. Sivridi will have my heart for all eternity. 💜💜💜
Thank you so very much! I am beyond grateful—and absolutely stunned at how quickly you tore through the thing haha. I’m 2/3 or so of the way finished writing the sequel.
You are very welcome! It was gripping reading, I couldn't put it down. But I'm glad I started reading it after you'd completed all the chapters. When you start posting the sequel I'll be in cliffhanger mode like everyone else! 😁
I took several hours off, and I've already teared up again here, 100% because of that last grin they shared on the battlefield, those "little moments" are so powerful: "Where his friend Uskol"
💜: "One of them must’ve climbed up freehand."
I love this scene between Turan and Kareva.
Love my dude: "at least that smug little shit wouldn’t be here to enjoy it."
This bonding moment between Alakuz and Miruz is a balm to my raw, bleeding soul.
:) "Many, many times."
You already knew I would, but I love love love the final conversation in the tent. Right to the core of it. Perfect conclusion, but now I'm dying to know what's next.
Bravo. Standing ovation.
Your dude has a fascinating arc in the second one. I will say no more than that, and thank you, and a million purple heart emojis
Yaaay (maybe...?), I didn't mean to fall so hard...but such is love.
I wasn't expecting to enjoy him this much. My original version was a much more straight-forward villain...but that's not nearly as much fun, is it?
Absolutely not! I will note for public record (so it doesn't get twisted in the press), I hold deepest respect and admiration for Kareva. Sivridi will have my heart for all eternity. 💜💜💜
Man, sneaking in these deep meaningful character moments — alongside insanely good action and fight scenes: Sue Purb.
Great finish to this. A bit mournful...but Kareva feels like someone you should never, ever, ever double cross. Ever. Like, never.
Guess we’ll have to find out in the sequel…
Wonderful work, fantastic characters. I am very much looking forward to the next installment!
Thank you so very much! I am beyond grateful—and absolutely stunned at how quickly you tore through the thing haha. I’m 2/3 or so of the way finished writing the sequel.
You are very welcome! It was gripping reading, I couldn't put it down. But I'm glad I started reading it after you'd completed all the chapters. When you start posting the sequel I'll be in cliffhanger mode like everyone else! 😁