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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

I'm hooked.

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Tom Schecter's avatar

Thank you, brother. I hope to hell the rest of it holds up.

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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

The prose is very good, Tom. Incredible first impression! I feel like this is you firing on all cylinders.

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Tom Schecter's avatar

💜

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Nick Winney's avatar

fierce and bloody! great intriguing scene setting!

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Tom Schecter's avatar

Appreciate you brother.

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Nick Winney's avatar

strong start there Tom!!!

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Lyndsey Resnick's avatar

Strong opening and a vivid setting. I'm in.

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Tom Schecter's avatar

💜

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Garen Marie's avatar

Ooo this is goooood.

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Tom Schecter's avatar

Thank you so much!

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Emil Ottoman's avatar

hooked

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Tom Schecter's avatar

Fuck yeah.

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Great scene setting. Nothing like a battle, blood and some ethereal beings to kick things off to a good start. I’ve high hopes now!

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Tom Schecter's avatar

Full disclosure: I am so sleep deprived that I thought your “You had me at terrible”comment was on this post and I was frantically looking through, wondering where the fuck I had even said “terrible,” but this makes more sense now.

Thanks so much for reading! 💜

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Oh no! Sleep is medicine - I hope you get some soon!

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Tom Schecter's avatar

I’ve got a one year old. I’ve got some scheduled for 2039 haha

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Zivah Avraham's avatar

Hooo, boy. My sister has twin daughters, just turned three. I can’t even imagine. Good luck!

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Shannon W Haynes's avatar

I accidentally skipped the prologue at first. This prologue is not to be missed.

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Tom Schecter's avatar

💜 Thank you!

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