Sharp, immersive, and built with supreme confidence, i very much enjoyed listening to this opening chapter. It grips with political tension and mythic dread. The upside-down goddess haunts brilliantly.
The pacing is great in this, and the contrasting characters, both with their own forbodings of war is excellent. I really dig this so far! Switching between "here are the political costs of war" to "our god is upside-down"... I love it.
This world is so vivid, you absolutely crushed this chapter. What a great setup for the story. It feels like were a launching into the world with high stakes and brutal costs.
Sharp, immersive, and built with supreme confidence, i very much enjoyed listening to this opening chapter. It grips with political tension and mythic dread. The upside-down goddess haunts brilliantly.
The pacing is great in this, and the contrasting characters, both with their own forbodings of war is excellent. I really dig this so far! Switching between "here are the political costs of war" to "our god is upside-down"... I love it.
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I know I would love this — I was right.
My man.
Great stuff as ever!
What a rich and complex world you've built! This is stunning.
🖤🖤🖤 thank you so much!
This world is so vivid, you absolutely crushed this chapter. What a great setup for the story. It feels like were a launching into the world with high stakes and brutal costs.
Appreciate you, brother.