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Garen Marie's avatar

No monsters, eh? Well-done action sequence. I've crafted a few of them on a *much, much* smaller scale, and it's super difficult to write them well. Major kudos for that! As one of the other commenters mentioned, there's no clear good or bad guy, which is an interesting device. And as I was reading through, I was asking myself, whose side am I on? Rebel or loyalist? Be prepared: I'm going to ask you to pick a side on Tuesday if you haven't already.

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Woah. Like … I am out of breath reading that! That has put me behind schedule for the day, but I’m not mad.

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