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Tom Schecter's avatar

Thank you so much! Yeah I enjoyed dropping this in the middle of the release because there’s some…I guess…back-shadowing? is that just shadowing? I don’t know what to call it. Time jumps are fun.

Garen Marie's avatar

Such a good addition to your worldbuilding. Creepy as hell with plenty of tension to ratchet up the fear factor. Poor Ganruz, though! So much potential.

Tom Schecter's avatar

Killed by what he wanted to be more than anything in the world…a big fucking obstacle.

Victor Jimenez's avatar

Nice, tension filled chapter. The implied is good

Slater Henatay's avatar

Totally sets the stage for the books while building tension in its own right. Great shit

Nick Winney's avatar

Im not sure i know what's going on but ... its tightly written and alluring... i know i need to get settled down and give myself time to read this well regarded fantasy of yours Tom, in more detail!

Mark M. Ater's avatar

Your writing paints such a vivid picture. It feels like I’m right there inside the scene. Beautifully done...

Tom Schecter's avatar

Appreciate you!